Below is a list of manuscripts which the authors would very much appreciate some feedback. Take a browse and if anything takes your fancy, drop me a line in the contact form on the right. I'll connect you with the author, and you can take it from there! Alternatively, follow the link to the story where provided and send the author a direct PM. Enjoy! SIGGI by Milo Maia Dark Fantasy 21,000 words Reader to focus on: Characters and plot please, with a keen eye on pacing. Siggi is an ageing warrior, searching for an artifact that will preserve her youth and stave off a fatal magic-eating disease. Siggi is a warrior and a mythology scholar looking to preserve the twilight of her fighting years by hunting down a legendary axe. The only problem is the axe is buried beneath a sacred mountain that warps time; the closer she gets, the quicker she ages. Take a peek! TALES BENEATH A WHITE MOON by Ellen FairyBlue Werewolf/General fiction 50,000 words Reader to focus ...