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Book Review: Octavia Bloom and the Missing Key

OCTAVIA BLOOM AND THE MISSING KEY by Estelle Grace Tudor

5 Stars

Verdict: A beautiful book, through and through. 


When eccentric Great Aunt Clara comes to stay in the Bloom's family castle, Octavia learns she's the keeper of the key for a magical fairyland. However, her family has a secret, one that involves finding rare flowers in order to break a curse. Although Octavia should protect fairyland and stay in the human world, the last flower to break the curse can only be found through the door. 

Octavia is clever and mischievous, so she's the perfect heroine for this tale. Her sister Fliss is protective and caring, making her a great side kick for this first book. I hear from the author that each book will focus on a different character, so this is Octavia's chance to shine.  

I loved Great Aunt Clara and Grandma. They're the sisters who were the past keepers of fairyland who have very different ideals about the hidden world, and they bounced off each other well. The book sets up a complex family history which I can't wait to learn more about. I wanted to know more about the past stories around fairyland, as well as Octavia's adventure. 

The cousins join Octavia and Fliss for the adventure, but they weren't too developed in this book. I think they could have played a bigger part in the story and showed more personality. I know they're going to be fleshed out more throughout the series, but I think there was space to do that in this book as things still happened to them which could have had a stronger meaning if explored a bit more. It felt like a missed opportunity, but didn't detract too much from the overall read.

All in all, this is an excellent first book to what I think will be a wonderful series. 

Source: Thanks you Estelle for proving a paperback copy. 

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